She Was Standing There
She was standing there,
Her eyes glistening like the sun reflecting off a mountain lake.
She had hair as dark as the night.
Her lips were a deep crimson hue,
So magnificently beautiful like a rainbow across the sky.
But alas, it was only a dream
That someday might come true.
By Kory Hoopes, 3rd grade Hmm, do you think that dream came true?
4 comments:
That kid had quite the mind to come up with stuff like that in 3rd grade!
That's awesome. I feel bad his dream didn't come true though.
I'm seriously amazed he could write something like this in 3rd grade. I think my best 3rd grade poem was about getting a tummy ache or something like that.
I don't know Mom . . . Kory is obviously your favorite. This is the second poem of his that you have posted!!!!!!
Who uses words like that at such a young age? Even grown-ups now hardly use the words "alas" and "hue." Kudos to Kory actually using that last word correctly though...
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